Wednesday, 25 April 2012

Chapter 6.- A surprised ending

If you finished the story, you should write your final task. There  are three parts:

1.-  Choose one of these tasks below:
  • Write a different ending
  • Try a solution for the soldier to leave the vault taking his part of the treasure 
2.- Write your opinion concerning the story.

3.- Do you celebrate St. John's Eve?

15 comments:

  1. I'm Alejandro.
    When they opened the chest with the treasure ,they take her part of the treasure , break the spell and go out .

    opinion:all the chapters of the tale:The Enchanted Soldier are very short but there are 6.the story is very good but is not my type of stories.I like the horror stories but it's very good.

    I don't celebrate ST.John's Eve but I think I celebrate with my girlfriend in our house in a romantic room with dinner and finish the day sleeping with she.

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  2. Hi!! I'm Iván Garrido of 2ºESO-B and this is my different final.
    When the soldier was inside the tower, he was tired and he slept. When he made up he was in the war fighting with Boabdil. All the story was a dream!! Boabdil attemped plunged the sword but he dodged. After 5 minutes fihgting, the soldier killed Boabdil.
    It was believed that the war was finished, when suddenly an arrow pierced and he died.

    My opinion: I think that the story is enjoyable and I like the final. I hope the final was happy like the most of the tales. For me is very short.

    My Saint Jonh's Eve: I like the St. John's Eve. Usually when it gets dark, I go with my friends along the beach. We talk and play until the fire is large. We jump above the fire

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  3. Hi ! I'm Razvan and this is my story...

    When the priest finished the magic spell , he would like to eat somethink but suddenlly , thepriest remember what Don Vincent said :`You must keap without eating for 24 hours `

    When Don Vincent saw the treasure , he ran to take some jewels .The soldier and the woman did the same .

    The soldier were happy because he achived its porpose.

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  4. Hi! I'm Jesús Hervás of 2º ESO B
    The priest eat food but Emmeline take the ring of salomon and the door was oppened and all the people take a part of the treasure and they were happy and the soldier became visible for all the people.

    opinion: My opinion of this chapter is, this tale: The enchant soldier, is a very interesant story but I did not like the end of the story because it would have been happy prefer.

    St.John's Eve: no, would celebrate dancing and being with my friends

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  5. Hi! I'm Baldo and this is my final:
    When the soldier was taking the treasure and the priest took he basket of food and Don Vincent saw it, he was running to him and hit him a punch on the chin, suddenly he fell backwards and was killed a stone. Died as the priest is the soldier got into his body and lifted the 2 half of the treasure and Don VIncent went to the Jail

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  6. Hi! I'm Marta !
    Write diferent ending:Father Thomas didn't eat when they found the treasure then the door opened and they took the treasure and run to leave the cave and the soldier was free for ever.
    Opinion: is very interesting althoug is not very happy the ending because the soldier is not free but one part of the ending is happy because Father Thomas gave permision to Emmeline and Don Vincent's get marryed.
    I don't celebrate St. John's Eve that is why is like other normal day for me.

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  8. Hi!!!!
    My name is Noelia Rebollo.

    1.-The soldier to leave the vault taking his part of the treasure, the spell go out and they finish story very happy.

    2.-In my opinion, the chapter 6 is very interesting because they found the treasure but later Emmeline exclaimed "I left the ring inside in the tower".
    Don Vicent's pocket were sufficient to make him a rich man and Father Thomas gave him permission to marry Emmeline and the soldier is still in the tower

    3.-I don't celebrate St John because I don't like.

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  9. Hi!I'm Maria Carrasco.
    1.-Different ending→Fathe Tomas didin't eat for 24 hours.They obtain opened the treasure, when the treasure was opened they to distribute the jewels and the soldier was free.

    My opinion→The story it's very interesting, because it's always happy but the endding was sad because Don Vicent failed marriage with Emmeline.

    Celebrate St John's Even→I don't celebrate St John's eve because is a normal day for my family.

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  10. HI! I'm Noelia Díaz of 2º E.S.O A.
    1.- Different ending:
    When the priest was going to eat Don Vincent took a bracelet and he threw it to the priest so the priest fell down. When they had divided the treasure the priest was still on the floor. So the escaped and the soldier became free for ever.

    2.- I think is a good story due to is a legend related to these places. On the other hand the soldier should go out and break the spell.

    3.- I don't celebrate St. Jonh's Eve because my family and I think that is not so important to be celebrated.

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  11. Hi, I'm David Serrano Infante 2º Eso A

    1.- Choose one of these tasks below:

    * Write a different ending

    The priest didn't eat any food , and the spell disappeared.Suddenly the soldier became young and handsome.They were rich and the soldier was free.

    2.- Write your opinion concerning the story.

    The story is very good and original but I hate the end, the end shoulds be happy but on the other hand you find a moral thought.

    3.- Do you celebrate St. John's Eve?

    No.

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  12. hi! Elvira Díaz Trujillo.

    In my opinion the story is beautiful and interesting. Don Vincent found a ring and he looked at Emmeline thet she was Father Thomas'helper. Don Vincent serenaded Emmeline. St John 's Eve Don Vincent saw a soldier. Don Vincent and the soldier were in cave. The soldier told about ring. Father Thomas, Emmeline and Don Vincent were locked. The young couple moved back to Salamanca and lived a happy life. This is the story.



    St Jonh's Eve, everybody went into tee town to dance but my family and I don't celebrate because is not important for us.


    Don Vincent and Emmeline got married.

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  13. Wrote by Fran Enache.
    Characters:
    Chapter 1.- Don Vincent, people dancing, the maiden and the priest.
    Chapter 2.- The soldier on the bridge, don vincent, local people dancing.
    Chapter 3 and 4.- Don Voincent, the soldier
    Chapter 5.- Don Vincent, father Thomas, Emmeline
    Chapter 6.- Don Vincent, the soldier, the maiden and the priest.

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  14. Hi! Ángela Romero.
    1.Don Vicent was the house the Father Thomas for take the treasure.
    The next, the lid closed. The vault closed with a crash.
    Don Vicent, Emmeline and priest he got locked in the tower.The soldier began his 100 yaer vigil. The jwels to take out the pocket but.
    Locked sufficent the Father Thomas.The young couple moved back to Salamanca, and lived a happy life together. The soldier is still in the tower.

    In my opinion tehs tory is very interesting when to levae the in the tower.

    I don´t celebre the San John´s, no was important.

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  15. Hi I´m Gabriel of 2ºESO B
    The Priest did not ea in spite of all the honger he had . So they could take could take the treaseru and the soldier´s spell was faded,but there was a big problem as Don Vincent had a headache , while others jumped of happiness ,Don Vincent fainted and Emmline was running toward him.All of they warried about Don Vincent took him to the square village ,so the doctor could see him , but when they didn,t expect,the doctor told then that Don Vincent was not breathing.

    My opinion on this story is pretty good and it caused me a lot of intrigue when reading and activities, which I liked to been the last activity on the blog, and we had to make another different ending.

    I do not celebrate St. John's Eve, but I would celebrate with friendsand family on the beach, jumping and dancing around the fire.

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